Dirt Bag wrote:pretty good, one thing though, dunno if there is anything you can do about this but the C in touChdown looks like a G cus of the endzone lettering
I like it, thats pretty cool. Really good idea with the background

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It took a while to find what dirt bag was talking about but once you find it it sticks out like a thorn. Maybe dropping a shadow behind the letters might correct that.
Like anything else practice makes perfect. There are multiple requests of people who want new sigs, I would recomend trying a couple.