by madaslives911 » Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:24 am
yep, the placement of the text could have been better but my vote would go for A. I like the background and the clarity of the render and composition-wise, the render follows the Rule of the Thirds - but needs a little bit of adjustment to the left.
Good Job!
B looks ok but i think the smoke/fog/soap suds effect took away most part of the render. otherwise, it would have really looked good. nice piece of work though.

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