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Postby boehlerking01 » Sat May 05, 2007 11:01 pm

I know this is a baseball sig but a little cnc would be cool....

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Postby joelamosobadiah » Sat May 05, 2007 11:37 pm

It's decent. Nice to see you trying to use a C4d. I am not really big on the second render in there. Also, the bat seems to be cut off.

Decent lighting though on the right. ;-D
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Postby deluxe_247 » Sat May 05, 2007 11:44 pm

excellent job on the right side of the sig, really nice lighting there. on the left side try changing the color of the cd4 to either red or white....possibly overlaying it...the silver doesnt match. text is kind of boring for being such a large part of the sig.
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Postby joelamosobadiah » Sun May 06, 2007 7:48 am

deluxe_247 wrote:excellent job on the right side of the sig, really nice lighting there. on the left side try changing the color of the cd4 to either red or white....possibly overlaying it...the silver doesnt match. text is kind of boring for being such a large part of the sig.


Exactly. Looking at it again, it nearly looks like two sigs. One with the right side and one with the left side. Maybe you could do text better if you took out something else. :-?
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Postby mrblitz » Sun May 06, 2007 8:55 am

Very nicely done, Boehler. I really like all the different attributes you put into it. ;-D
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Postby boehlerking01 » Sun May 06, 2007 8:10 pm

Another try.

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Postby madaslives911 » Sun May 06, 2007 9:00 pm

seems to be too busy/complicated for me...

you need to choose which of the two pics you wanna use as your main focal point;

the lighting effect seems to be too bright (the one behind the bat) - try to lower the intensity.

i agree with deluxe... the text ain't that good at all.
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Postby joelamosobadiah » Sun May 06, 2007 9:22 pm

boehlerking01 wrote:Another try.

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Better, but I would stick with just one of the renders.

I would try moving the C4d behind the render on the right and mess with the blending options on it. Then just put the text on the right side.
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Postby BGbootha » Sun May 06, 2007 10:55 pm

I really like it, but I got 2 things.

1. The lighting on the right side is too bright, just bring it down a couple of notches.

2. The text isn't working, needs to do something.
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Postby madaslives911 » Sun May 06, 2007 11:15 pm

BO, did you diffuse the render?
also, try adjusting the render a bit toward the bottom so as not to cut off a big portion of his head.
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