Adam Dunn

[boehlerking01]

I know this is a baseball sig but a little cnc would be cool....

[joelamosobadiah]

It's decent. Nice to see you trying to use a C4d. I am not really big on the second render in there. Also, the bat seems to be cut off.

Decent lighting though on the right.

[deluxe_247]

excellent job on the right side of the sig, really nice lighting there. on the left side try changing the color of the cd4 to either red or white....possibly overlaying it...the silver doesnt match. text is kind of boring for being such a large part of the sig.

[joelamosobadiah]

excellent job on the right side of the sig, really nice lighting there. on the left side try changing the color of the cd4 to either red or white....possibly overlaying it...the silver doesnt match. text is kind of boring for being such a large part of the sig.

Exactly. Looking at it again, it nearly looks like two sigs. One with the right side and one with the left side. Maybe you could do text better if you took out something else.

[mrblitz]

Very nicely done, Boehler. I really like all the different attributes you put into it.

[boehlerking01]

Another try.

[madaslives911]

seems to be too busy/complicated for me...

you need to choose which of the two pics you wanna use as your main focal point;

the lighting effect seems to be too bright (the one behind the bat) - try to lower the intensity.

i agree with deluxe... the text ain't that good at all.

[joelamosobadiah]

Another try.

Better, but I would stick with just one of the renders.

I would try moving the C4d behind the render on the right and mess with the blending options on it. Then just put the text on the right side.

[BGbootha]

I really like it, but I got 2 things.

1. The lighting on the right side is too bright, just bring it down a couple of notches.

2. The text isn't working, needs to do something.

[madaslives911]

BO, did you diffuse the render?
also, try adjusting the render a bit toward the bottom so as not to cut off a big portion of his head.