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Patrick Willis (Updated V2)

Postby FF Pirate » Thu May 17, 2007 7:38 pm

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Tried some more new stuff. C/C?
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Postby TheFranchise » Thu May 17, 2007 9:38 pm

Alot of critics like the face of the render to be sharper. Typically I don't always agree with that, but in your sigs case it would enhance the effect you went for.
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Postby joelamosobadiah » Thu May 17, 2007 11:05 pm

If you are going to have the render that big, then I would make the face the focal point. Right now there really isn't anything that my eyes are drawn to. :-?
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Postby deluxe_247 » Thu May 17, 2007 11:08 pm

i agree with franchise...th erender needs to be more clear when its this large..at least around his face area. ;-D
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Postby madaslives911 » Thu May 17, 2007 11:08 pm

FF Pirate wrote:Image

Tried some more new stuff. C/C?


at first glance, i thought there were 2 faces :-/ but examining it closely, it was just a part of the helmet. :-B
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Postby FF Pirate » Fri May 18, 2007 7:17 am

joelamosobadiah wrote:If you are going to have the render that big, then I would make the face the focal point. Right now there really isn't anything that my eyes are drawn to. :-?


How would I do this? Sharpen the render and add more lighting?
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Postby joelamosobadiah » Fri May 18, 2007 9:49 am

FF Pirate wrote:
joelamosobadiah wrote:If you are going to have the render that big, then I would make the face the focal point. Right now there really isn't anything that my eyes are drawn to. :-?


How would I do this? Sharpen the render and add more lighting?


I would start with removing the grunge brushing from the face. If you add lighting, I would add some smooth lighting (150 px soft white brush).

Right now my eyes want to jump to the left side of the sig for some reason. The left side of his helmet looks busy like it might have too much grunge brushing on it. Hopefully that helps. Without seeing the original render, some of this might not apply depending on what the original looked like. ;-D
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Postby FF Pirate » Fri May 18, 2007 3:14 pm

I switched from a heavy grunge to a more smooth brush. I changed lighting and text. Is this better and what should I work on?
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Postby deluxe_247 » Fri May 18, 2007 5:08 pm

can you post the original render? it would give us a better idea of how to guide you in this thing. ;-D
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Postby FF Pirate » Sat May 19, 2007 8:30 am

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