Larry Fitz.

[Pleathe5th]

Another Attempt ...

This one i made on my own time (not class )

I dunno i'm not entirely sure about it, but lemme know anyway .

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[Pleathe5th]

hummm lacking a border ... o well ignore that fact for the moment

[joelamosobadiah]

I think I like the displacement you did on the left hand side of the sig.
I am not feeling the lines in the background. I like the detail it adds, but it looks like you painted lines back there with pain or something. I would try to find some way to add more abstract detail to the bg.

Oh and gotta find a new font. I try not to criticize text too much, but this text is really distracting.

[Pleathe5th]

I think I like the displacement you did on the left hand side of the sig.
I am not feeling the lines in the background. I like the detail it adds, but it looks like you painted lines back there with pain or something. I would try to find some way to add more abstract detail to the bg.

Oh and gotta find a new font. I try not to criticize text too much, but this text is really distracting.

Yeah i hear ya i'm not sold on the font my self, but please criticize anything ya see