Engram

[Metroid]

I know I have like 4 sig threads up for critique in the last few days but this will be the last one for a while...again I was trying some new stuff and was trying to be mindful of clutter. Thoughts?

[joelamosobadiah]

There you go. You got some color going on now. While that's a good thing, might try white for the glow or a color that would match the other colors a bit better. The green sticks out a bit maybe. The text is good as well as the background. You've got the basics down pat man. Good product.

Oh and don't worry about how many sig threads you get going. If people quit giving you C/C then stop posting them is what I would do. This is how you learn and this forum isn't in any danger of getting too cluttered up if you know what I mean.

[Metroid]

Right on man.

Yeah the "green" glow does look a little off. I was actually trying go for that ugly neon green color that the Seachickens have in their color scheme. maybe it would have "popped" more if I hadn't desaturated the render so much and you could see the green color on the jersey....I dunno. Maybe I'll try it in white and see what it looks like.

Thanks again for the critique.

[joelamosobadiah]

I know I mentioned it on another sig and it didn't turn out right, but you might experiment some more with white brushing on top of the sig to et some lighing and see what it does for you on this one.